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Fascinating experiment Pawel. I read all three (or attempted to)

1. Afterlight - Unreadable. Crude beyond primative graphics really distracted. No real redeeming qualities for me; I stopped trying after 8-page turns

2. The Warm Hill - Better characterization. I liked the story, but it was pretty simple graphically and got confusing towards the end turns; the image consistency between characters was pretty poor. I could see the decline in the son, but it wasn't consistent. Speech bubbles jumped around, so it was not clear whose dialog was whose.

3. Small Hours - Visually the most interesting for a graphic novel. You can see those Gemini tokens doing their work. I really liked the sci-fi nature of this story, but found it getting a bit jumbled in its logic the more pages we turned. But this was the one I could genuinely see being adapted to a TV series. There were still some inconsistencies with the characters. The Dock worker morphed several times, yet remained remarkably consistent. His daughter seemed to change into a totally different character between scenes.

All in all, great to see this work.

I wonder if you do most of your work in Polish in the Claude interface, as the syntax and phrasing don't seem constructed by a native English speaker.

Great work

SM

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